Write a story about your night in a haunted house!
Imagine that you spent the night in a haunted house. Write a story (with a beginning, middle, and end) about your adventure there. What did the house look like? Who did you meet? What happened there? How did you feel? YOU MUST START YOUR STORY WITH A STORY STARTER HOOK.
Haunted house.
ReplyDeleteIt was a dark and stormy night on killkare road in the year 1972. Dayton whispered, Dont go in there Cole please dont go. Have you ever spent a night in a haunted house. No said Dayton. So we went in the haunted house creeek went the wood door open slowly. As we were getting ready to sleep something was making a loud nosie and it was getting closer and closer then we started running and we were scearming and then finllay we reached the door but the door closed and we tryed to find a way out but the nosie was so close we were trap and we almost died but it was my dad scary us to teach us a lesson to not sleep in a haunted house.
WOW how can you type that much at the same day?
DeleteI like the part when you said you went up killcare road!!
Deleteyou shouldn't put an year before you were alive
DeleteI like yours becuse I liked one you said you you'er going up kilckar road.
DeleteI really liked your scary story!!! It was great!
DeleteI start to here a girl and a man laghing I didn't no what to do. All of the sudden they stoped there was blood driping from the cyling and I started up the stairs. Something was draging a body down the stairs.All the sudden I hered the screming again and it started coming towds me and all the sudden it went back down stairs and in the bastment. I hered it "I will get you' said a shaggy vocie.Then I ran all the way home to my mom.
ReplyDeleteThat was very scary Susannah!!!!!
DeleteIlike yours Susannah it was great.
DeleteI like your story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DeleteThat was scary!!!!!!!
DeleteHUNTED HOUSE. Mom who is that guy staring atm in the window? I don't know. So me and mom walked in side. Wene we got insied I saw a zombie he was playing the pione. Then I scremed. he said he was freindly. Than he told us his name. It was elvis. Then I told him if he could give us a ture uf the place. And he did. I met a vanpire named emily. Then a pumkin named scary. Then we went to sleep. Wene I woke up I saw a gost drinking mick on the tarest. Ten I want out side and scared her. Then I saw a little boy playing soccer. I went to go play with him and he kicked me. Then I went inside and left the house I iven got a souviner from the house it was a puupy. THE END!
ReplyDeletenice job ,thats alottttt of writing!!!!!!!!!
DeleteI really liked your writing!!!
DeleteI like when you said you saw a little kid playing soccer.
Deletesome spelling errors but everybody does that accasinoally i think that was a very cool haunted house writing\description
DeleteGood Job. How can you do that.
DeleteMy brother was running around in sercles and came out out safe. I went to the house and sleped all night. Then, I fellte a tentacle tuch my nose, and it was very cool. Next, I woke up very energized. I went out on a walk to see my firends. I had no tetacles anymore. Finally, I went to my parents house. By Shane
ReplyDeleteI like the part when you said you said you said you said you saw your freinds.
DeleteI like that you said your friend.
DeleteI was so scared I was running but someone was chasing me and the footsteps was closer each step I took!!! I thought to myself, I should never go to a haunted house again! I saw so many ghosts, zombies, scelotons and bats! I felt so so so scared! I could not go to sleep at all!!! When it was morning I zoomed out of there and never went there in my hole entire life!! I told my family all about it they were scared to even more scared then me and they didn't even see it! ha ha! I never ever ever went in that house again!!! My sister did the same thing she went in that house agin she got scared to and she never went in that house agin.
ReplyDeletehow much time did that take because I wrote less
DeleteI like your story alot!!!how do you get those ideas?
DeleteCreeeek went the old wood door. When I open the door that creeeek came.And it was dark.And spooky. And I don't ot go there any more. Then it was betr when it was suny. So I got bake home. And it was good. So I whant to have fun! The haunted house was creepy. I like to go bake home. By Maxim #4
ReplyDeletework on spelling maxim and you also did fabulas at the same time!!!!!!!!
DeleteI was running as fast as I could but I found something In the haunted house so I turnd It on and showed it in fromt of the gost and It went away and I maet ms scroggins and I saw her smileing and we walked home and she was my 2nd grad teacher and I helped her get her work done before school starts?
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ReplyDeleteI ran and ran but the monster was getting closer and closer. First, the haunted house made me creep out. I couldn't stand. I tried to run away but the monster put me on his back. He was like 30 FEET tall. Then , the monster kept saying moo-ga-ga. Then the haunted house looked like my house so I went in. The monsters said,"come in if you dare." Whoo, that was hard! Can you imagine this place?
Your story remindes me of my baby brother when he says moo-ga-ga. GOOD JOB!!!
DeleteI was walking on kilcare road. I saw the haunted house. I went inside it was windy and chilly. but then I heard footsteps. I wispeard to my self please no zombie butler.I was realy scared 'shiver' then I heard footsteps. I ran for it. it I went to bed. I woke up. I heard bats evry were.but the bad news is that the zombie butler so I ran I found the exit I went outside I went home the End.
ReplyDeleteGOOD JOB REMEMBER TO PUT PERIODS!!!!!!
DeleteOne stormy night I was walking heard a sound.I was scared,but I kept going.A zombie came out of the ground,I froze.It went back in the ground.I heard footsteps I began to run,I ran as fast as I could go.Waterdrops fell from the ceiling. I bumped into something. I looked up, it was a staircase. I climbed it, when I reached the top I heard the footsteps again it was coming from a dark room. I went inside, and there standing before me was my mom! I was relived, I hugged my mom. She said, "I was lost too!" Then we went home.
ReplyDeletevery good for a second grader
Deletethats alot of writing for a second grader and your a very creative girl.
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Abigail [in her class]
you are a craitive little girl for a second grader.
DeleteGREAT JOB SENECA !!!!! I think your reply is good.
DeleteGreat job!!!Love it.
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ReplyDeleteI was running as fast as I could but he just wouldend stop . I yelled to my brother " Stop . Just for a second . " I had no idea were he was going . then we came apon a scary house I said " Come on lets go back . " but he didn't go back insted he went in . I cased him up and down stairs through hall ways in and out of doors . Then we found a door opend . So we ran right in . It was a bedroom with a chest . There was potions , broomsticks , and magic wands. "thump thump thump . " foot steps someone is coming ! We needed to get out fast then I said "Let's jump out the window ! " The foot steps where getting louder . We jumped out fast . "crack ! " that was the sound of us landing on the dry leaves . We ran as fast as we could home .
Sebastian that was a great crative way to do a story!!!
DeleteNICE JOB!!!
yours is awsame like you. Iliked when you said you heard foot steps on the stairs.
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DeleteI was galloping on a dark, black horse running from whoever was behind me! Whoever was behind me was chasing me farther cand farther away from home, until they chased me straight into a haunted house! The walls had30 buckets of blood in them and the gates, to scary to look at. And that harvest moon shone down on a spooky haunted house. Then I saw a woman dressed in a witch outfit but she said it was her halloween costom,then she lead me to a room in the haunted house hotel. She said I could stay there as long as I wanted. I said that I would pay her $60.50 to stay there 1 month until I had enough food to go home and give it to my family. She also said I could go out any time I wanted. So I said I would go get some comfterble blankets. That night I heard somone singing, " give a girl with golden hair a wish to get back to her fa-mily!" Then I woke up and got on my horse and 4 poeple started chasing me 1st a zombie 2nd a witch 3rd a mummy 4th aghost but then I saw it wasn't a zombie it was the bellboy it wasn't a witch it was the cook it wasn't a mummy it was my neighbor! So my neighbor took me home and I took food to my family. THE END!
ReplyDeleteI like your writing makes so much sense!!!!
Deletehow much time did this take? don't put - in family.
Deletei think this is the best haunted house story yet i liked how you used lots of detail and also lots of characters
DeleteWow! That is a lot of writing!
DeleteIt was a dark stormy night and I heard a scream ! Firist I baegan to look around.So I looked in one of the rooms and there was a clean bed! Next, I wock up and saw ink on the floor ! So I looked up and I didn't have any shoes on!Then, I had to go baer foot and I stepped in slime! Lastly I found my shoes and there were slime in them! So I found the thing and it was a skelaton! Bening in a hauted house is fun!
ReplyDeleteIt was a dark stormy night lighting was flashing on halloween night. I was walking home from shcool when I got home the door was locked mom an dad was sleeping evryone was sleeping but one door was unlock .I went up to the door "knock knock" no one answard I opend the door "creeek" I looked inside Iwas scard Isaw cobwebs and broken windows .than I went inside I went upstiars there was a bathroom an a bedroom than i went to sleep I had a night mare I woke up at 6 a.m. I grabed my backpack an ran home.
ReplyDeleteI ran so fast but i did not get out. The creepy haunted house had sworeds and it had creepy pictuers I saw a mummy and a zombie and frankensten.I almost died because frankensten made a potion and he wanted to tri it on me.
ReplyDeleteIt was a dark and scary night when I came up to a haunted house!Then my friend shouted 'don't go in there noooo.....'Ahhhhhhh' I heard a long loud screamI was running so fast I could bearly here my self breath.Then I stopped and met a very friendly ghost.I felt adventourous at first then I felt scared last I felt happy in a horrified way.Last week I had a very unusall adventure.
ReplyDeletea ghost SHOUTED I would not go in there if I were you. Are you afraid of the dark. It was a cold and stormy night and I saw a haunted house. Thumb went the storm. I was running as fast as I could ,but the ghost got me!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteNICE JOB!!!! I think you did a great job Ansha !!!!
DeleteIt was a Halloween night I was tricker triting and I walked up to a spookey house . OH NO my sister said yelled don't go in don't go in . would you have a party in a haunted house ? creek that was the sound of me stepping on the wooden step eak that was the sound of me opening the door . There were eyes every were I started to run faster and faster . Then I noticed that some thing was following me I looked behind and it was Frankenstine he didn't hert me he led me to the door and I never mencen it to any one but now that is the end of my spookey stoy .
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DeleteDear Emma,
Hi! How are you? Did you have a nice weekend? Well I just wanted to say I liked your story a lot, but theres no exlimation so it dosn't fit.
From,
Abigail C.
I thought I was in the story GREAT JOB!
DeleteIt was a dark and cold night when I came to a house 100 years ago. I rang the bell and '' screech '' went the windows. I ran as fast as the wind and hid behind a bush. I looked back and there was nothing. I slowly walked up to the door and went inside. ''Boom'' went the door and it closed. I slowly tiptoed up the stairs and I saw a familiar face. It was GEORGE WASHINGTON !!! I was happy and scared. Then he just disappeared. I went to a room and there was a gigantic spider. It was bigger than I grabbed a stick and poked him 100 times. It was dead I saw all the juicy blood coming out of his body. I found a bed and slept in there for 3 hours until I heard a sound , crash and I found a key and I zoomed to the door and opened it. I ran as fast as the speed of light back home.
ReplyDeleteGreat job wesley! Exept it dosnet make sense when you said 100 years ago cause you would be108 by now.
DeleteGREAT JOB!!!
I cam a crost a hows . ''thump thump thump '' went the windo. Sam and I ran in sied the hows . we didn't look bak and hid we sloly cam awt creek creek creek went the flor. we went up stars and hid undr nyth the bed.
ReplyDeleteah!I was running from a mummy from a haunted house ! I ran right
ReplyDeleteinto other ! I was trapped ! Lucky help came just in time ! I saw 15 people or so ! the mummy went after them ! It allowed me to either explore I mite run into more mummy !but if I go home I mite lose my way & run into mummy ghost & other stuff.so I chose explore
My mom said '' be careful drop off me in the haunted home a zombie come to get me but I made a friendly one. Can you siv in a haunted home. oooooooohhh that's the ghost being creepy. I fly for some reosn that was the ghost we made a cool family.
ReplyDelete"boo!" went the ghost that popped out of the door that leads into the haunted house .The house was filled with monsters the light was dim and a slimy yellow. I thought I wasn't going to make it out alive. You could hear the high pitch screeching of bats flying down the bark cold hall. I looked out the window I saw a ghost shaped moon. I turned around and something was following me. I started running it was too late the slimy beast had grabbed me. It almost gobbled me up but I found out it was jelly and ate it all up. I wanted to other monster to be candy but they weren't. I was so scared I nearly had a heart attack. I am happy I didn't. The Dracula was chasing me and trying to suck my blood but I got away. I wondered what other monsters were out for me but I realized something. I was not with a tour group and I wasn't alone beady red eyes were looking at me from all ways. The windows rattled and I saw something emerge out if the darkness. It was a giant nine eyed monster. I started running for my like not wanting to look back or slow down, I turned the corner and saw another one two monsters were chasing me it gobbled me up me up whole. I tried to punch my way our of it and it worked it barfed me up and I ran away. It was choking so I got away for now. I got out just in time to escape a one hundred feet tall twenty eyed monster and the haunted house just disappeared and all the monsters did too!!
ReplyDelete"Boo!" went the ghost that popped out of the door that leads into the haunted house. I almost chickened out but it was to late I went in. The house was filled with a dim light that was a slimy yellow .I thought I wasn't
going to make it out alive .You cold hear the screeching of the bats that were zooming down the hall right past me. I looked out the window and I saw a ghost shaped moon. I turned around something was following me I started to run but it was to late the slimy monster grabbed me around the wast
That's a lot of writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Delete' Rore!' I ran to the glow it was a honted haws. Rite in frunt of me was a fiying snow lepered. I ran to hide! But it faund me. I ran to the honted house. I saw the hole hered of flying snow lepereds! But thay wher a sleep. So I ran to a door lablede portl I saw A flash of lite. I was in A bote I jumped awt and got back the fiying snow lepreds were part of the family.
ReplyDeleteI was running fastr and fastr as the foot steps came closr and closr. It was frighing. But then I hurd a sond like creeeeeeek I tihnk it was a monster in the hos. I can't bleve I wanted to spend the night her but I did when I wooke up I packt my bags and went to exspor the haunted house. I trnd off the litse flict on and off and then I went to go to get my fredse and I dard them to go in the haunted house. we went to get something to eat and it just got more spooky and mer spook and we ran and and I got houm and my perents did not belev us and I never sen that house ever in my lif.
ReplyDeleteWe were running I heard the screeching behind me. We stopped right in front of the haunted house. We kicked the gate open it slammed behind us. We heard moaning from front of us. we didn't care. A wave of zombies were coming. We ran inside the old house. We closed the door and locked it. Suddenly the moaning got louder. We found a bed and I looked at the clock it was 12:52 am. We had to get some shut eye. We plopped onto the bed. Right before I drifted off to sleep the moaning sound came again. But right in my face! It was a giant spider. RUN I screamed in Jacobs face and we ran fast. The door was locked we turned around SLOWLY. The spider was about the size of 30 cars. I slammed the door open. We ran all the way back to my house.
ReplyDeletethat's a super cool story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DeleteDid anything else happen Sean?
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ReplyDeleteI ran I looked behind me and saw a mummy. I stopped in front of me I saw a gate. I opened the gate and I saw a house. I thought it was a haunted house. I went inside. I heard a voice your time is up. Then I saw a vampire. I ran out the door and I saw a bunch of mummies following me. I made it home safe.
I was running as fast as I could but the ghost got even closer and closer. If I lived in this haunted house I will sleep on a crooked bed and a crepy house. I will move out of that house if I lived there and never come back agin to that haunted house. I wonder if a witch will live there after me.
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ReplyDelete1,000 years ago me and my friend Bob approached a haunted house. Bob wanted to go in there and I said don't go in there. He asked me have you been in a Haunted house? It is a haunted house!!! I said. Suddenly the door opened and something came running for us. We ran as fast as we could. Then it got us and said, Tag your it!
Boom bang went the lighting from above the haunted house. One Halloween night me and my friends were trick or treating .Then we saw a very old house .Eric dared me and Rameen to go into the house. Then I told them, "Why don't you come in too?" Eric said, "Fine come on lets go in Dillon" "like why should we" said Dillon. "People live in there." "How do you know?" said Eric. "lets go in and get this over with and get out" said Dillon. But no one knew it was a haunted house. When thay walked in they saw spider webs and herd foot steps from up stairs. "Can we go now were in the house" said Rameen. Eric said "No! We should have a bet. Who ever stays in the house the longest wins all our candy." I agreed with Eric, we should have a bet. "Are you in Dillon and Rameen?" I said. "Let us think about it." "Okay were in." they said. So they all split up. Dillon went to the kichen. Eric went to the bedroom. Rameen went up stairs and I went to the basement. Eric got hungry. He checked if there was any food in the frige. All that came out was a blast of wind. He shot all the way across the room. He ran to the door but it would not open. He heard steps comeing for him. Eric screamed. He finally opened the door and ran.
ReplyDeleteNext, a giant spider went creep creep creep up stairs then Dillon heard it. He ran to the roof and slid down it then he ran when he hit the floor.
Finally it was only me and Rameen. Eventually I found Rameen and I said "mabe we should not have done this after all." Then we hear a bang on the closet door. then a bunch of skellotens came out and we ran out of the house. "So no one won the candy I guess" said Rameen. "Yah" I said. "Hay at lest we have time for trick or treting" Dillon said. "then lets go" Eric said. "Yah!" we all said.
The End
By: Ian Romo
most writing I have ever seen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.
DeleteWould you rather go in a hunted house and get 50.00$ or fall in a deep hole? I would rather fall in a deep hole. What if there are ghosts in there? What if there are zombies chaseing me? I would be scared . Backsold went to school. At lunch time,his frinds dared him to a scarry house at Main street. Along time ago, a man named Dr.Dannie lived in that hunted house. Now, he is dead. Backsold bit his lip. He noctised that he was shivering. At last, he said,"Yes''. in a scared voice. After a long time of school, Backsold walked to Main street. the road looked croked and creepy. Bravely, Backsold clicked the doorbell .the door did not open b
ReplyDelete"Drip Drop" That was the sound of the rain hitting the ground. I went inside I herd A loud HAAAAAAAAAAAA! I saw my friend screaming! "sam" I screamed! I saw an evil vampire! Haaaa I screamed the vampire went hisss! Then I got my friend sam and I ran upstairs as fast as we could. I think we are safe here. Now we just have to find a place to sleep. I said Like that is going to be easy I said. Lets run sam said. Last we ran downstairs. Then we ran out of the haunted house all the way home.
ReplyDeleteTen years ago is when I first opened the door of that haunted house. I felt scared when I first went inside. I heard footsteps as I walked along the hall. I heard growls and howls as I walked faster and faster up the steps as I gave myself a tour though the haunted house. I heard evil laughs of witches as I headed for the door. they were already close and I tried to open the door but I could not. They were stuck! I was so scared that I thought I would never get out. I saw spiders and bats crawling and flying all around me. I found a back door which was a relief. It was not locked so I got out of the spooky haunted house. I hope I never go into that haunted house again!
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ReplyDeleteWe were running as fast as possible, but it was faster! Oh, I should probably tell you who I am and was with me. Hi, my name is Kai. and the guy who was with me is my friend Thorben. I think you're wondering how this happened and how I got in here. Well, On Halloween night I found a ghost. ''Omg." I gasped. I quickly ran back to my house. I was so relived I made it. Except... I wasn't really at my house. It looked more scary and creepy than our house. Then, I heard something come out of the leaves... It kept coming, closer and closer... ''AHHH!'' I screamed. Then It said "calm down." " Huh, is this Thorben?" I asked. "yes, It's me Thorben." "how did you get here Thorben?'' I asked. "ghost." "Same here." I said. Suddendly... Something came out of the bushes. We raced into the house! We could here it's moans from outside. "What was that?!" I asked. Then I realized there were floating books and candles "Oh my gosh!" We saw closet. We made a run for it. We dodged the floating books and candles. I opened the door. We saw vacuum cleaner. "do you think this is useful " I said. "Yes!" I took the vacuum cleaner. "How will we get light?" Thorben asked. "I do have two extra glow sticks." I said. Thorben took one. "Are you ready?" I asked Thorben. "Yes!" We turned on the vacuum cleaner on and sucked up ghosts with it. Suddenly... The door crashed open. "Omg!" I shouted. A headless monster crashed threw. We ran down stares. We were running as fast as possible. but it was faster! "Run!" I shouted. I tripped and dropped the vacuum cleaner. "Forget the vacuum cleaner!" Thorben shouted. We saw a stairway down. "Run for that door!" I screamed. We dashed for the door, shut it, and blocked it off. We saw something, it looked like a vacuum cleaner but you wear it like a backpack. And it has a light on it. I picked it up. It was very dusty. ON the side it said: GHOST CATCHER. "Thorben, come see this!" I said. I looked for a trigger for some reason it had two triggers. I pulled one back a light flashed really bright. The other trigger, "must trigger a vacuum," I said. The stuff we had used to block the door crashed to the ground. "Oh shoot, " I whispered. The headless monster was back. We were cornered. Then I remembered something, "The ghost catcher," I said to myself. I dived to the ghost catcher. I blinded him and sucked him up. "Few," Thorben said. We walked up the stairs again. We saw a ton of ghosts. they saw us. I blinded them all with my light and sucked them up. Outside, we looked for anything else. Suddenly, Thorben and I were grabbed. We escaped the grabbing hands, and zombies came out from the ground. "ZOMBIES!" I yelled. We ran to the woods. We found a big stick we saw the zombies in the distance. We bashed the zombies away and we went back to our house. I told my parents this story. I hope this happens again.
50 years ago, there was a tornado when I came upon a large haunted house.It was a creepy house. But I had to go inside it if I wanted to survive. The door creeked open. I went inside. There were webbs and spiders. I said,''hello.'' There was no answer. ''Is anyone home?'' I asked. Mom said,''it doesn't look like it.'' ''Lets check it out.'' I said. So we climbed the stairs to the top floor. There stood a vampire. He said,''who are you?'' I said,''Caden.'' Ellie said,''Ellie.'' And Mom said,''Kindra.'' He said,''why are you here?'' Mom said,''because of the tornado.They said it will go on until 5;30 tomarow.'' After we sleped over and ate our meals, we lefed at 5;55 when we were shore the tornado was over. We said,''bye'' to the vampire. Then we drove home.
ReplyDeleteIt was a drek and sormye niht .I was being chast by a gost .I was so sared that I cod not mov .so I ran in to a haunted home to be safe frpm the gost. I was omoste steard to def. whta if gost can go thow walls I thot . BUT IT WAS A CINDE GOST.THEHOTIT HOME WAS SAREY . THE GOST CEPT ME CUPNEY.A MAN CAME BUT HE WAS NOT FRELE.he fretin to kil me .BUT HI Gost bbt it for me. thak you. I sed to the gost. you wecm the gost sed in a cut vos, and the gost shot bast fo the gost on to the man. gate job I sed to the gost. and the man was omest bech. lets kil him with posnist food sed the gost that lib ther. ok I sed dut lets dig a ho to dar him frst. so we dig dig will dhit dig sw we digde and digde so dep ta we hit wotre and we digde side was in to the riv that gos to the ilot koshint and the olot kesin gost to a howay onshion in then the hiwie plepl wod dere him
ReplyDeleteonce apon a time monsters were real on halwen nite Iwanderd in to a hantedhous and I went in.and nowon now onti that day it was big and scary it had a big creaky door I khced but gest then the door opend but nowone opend it I went insid the lits were off sudinly the door banged shut Itryed to open it itt wodent buge I looked around ther was lots of cobwebs it was scary I toke a step fored I fele in to a pite I was traped I scremed for help a scelatin pired in to thye pite he showted introder more came cering a cage thay droped it on me theen thefor lored i was put on a cart thay put the cart on a trake i went up and up and up the trak ended and i fell part of the trae fell and hite the cartwhach flung me no to the trake inr revers the cag brokand I ran and ran and ranIbumped in to some sceltins gareds and pased them ifoned the key and opendtthe door the end
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